Q&A: Hi guys can you please correct my english grammar? I am poor in grammar please help me?

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  1. Ben says:

    Video games are fun to play. They provide brain stimulation and you can acquire friends if you play online with others. Every day the video gaming system is becoming more popular. Video games attract the attention of many people, both young and old.

    In the Eighties, Nintendo family computer was the first gaming console ever created. The graphics were not as good as today’s Video consoles, but Video Game consoles did many good things for the people in that generation. They brought fun with less violence than todays video games. There were few violent games in the eighties, Battle City for example was one of them.

    As technology advanced, new gaming systems have emerged. An example of these new innovations are Play Station 1, 2, and 3; XBox, and Wii. They are the best selling video game consoles produced today. Those old games that were played on Nintendo game console have been maximized to there capabilities until now.

    Playing Video games is important entertainment in our lives, however we must consider the bad effects they can have for us. We must be mindful that this type of amusement is addictive unless played in moderation. I’ve been researching their pros and cons, and I conclude that video games have little benefits we can get for us. Sitting long periods of time may lead to health problems. As I mentioned above, playing in moderation is what we need.

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